The evil roommate

Once upon a time there was little girl Jill and her new roommate Samantha alias Sam. Jill had decided to move to another place to study. But she hadn't been able to afford to live on her own. Her only option was to move to a shared apartment with a roommate. She was very excited, because the new roommate would be very nice. And studying in the new school would be very nice, and there weren't controlling parents, so she could do what she wanted to.

Jill had just moved in her new apartment, but she was searching for a roommate. One day she went to see her roommate, Samantha. She found Sam on a website, when Sam was searching for apartments and roommates.

They met at a nearby café. Sam was polite to Jill and she treated Jill a cocoa. Sam and Jill talked for a few hours and they decided that Sam could move in Jill's apartment.

Sam brought all her stuffs in their home the next day. Jill wanted to be friendly and she made food for her. They talked about many things. Jill made Sam feel nice, because she cleaned, made food, she wanted to be nice and kind.

Sam began to feel at home quickly and she spread her stuff everywhere in their apartment. She was shouting at Jill if Jill moved her stuff. Sam taunted Jill's food, because she said it is tasted bad. Jill always did everything wrong, and she had to hear shouting every day.

One day Jill went her friend and she came back home late in the evening. Sam was sitting at home fretful, and she was hold a frying pan in her hand. Jill hadn't made food for her and she had came home too late.Sam shouted too hard!

After this day Jill comes home at six at the latest and she can't move her own stuff. Everything is Sam's, and if she see a wrong move, she shout very hard. Jill can't go to the toilet at a wrong time and she can't a wake up too early or too late, because Jill should make for Sam. Jill can't do anything if she doesn't have a permission from Sam.

Jill thinks this is worse than if she lived at home with her parents. And then she wakes up. Fortunately, everything was just a nightmare!

It is a horrible nightmare!

Self-evaluation:

This is difficult for me.

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