There was a little sunny farm town next to New York. The town had been terrorized by a murderer for many years. His name was Bad Rex. Bad Rex had come to the town
many years ago because his sister was very sick. Rex's sister healed quickly
but on one Tuesday night everything changed. Someone shot at Rex's sister, and
she was badly wounded. She never got back to normal. She was bullied because her
face was maimed. Finally, she died of her injuries.
Rex's anger grew inside him. He
hated everyone in this town. When his anger grew, he began to plan for the
so-called people's pruning. First he shot his sister's murderer, and then he
started shooting at random people. His anger grew every time he shot
something. His blood lust grew every day, and finally, he shot almost every
oncoming human.
The citizens increased resistance to wards Rex. They began to plan, how they could get rid of Rex. Everyone in this city
feared and hated Rex.
On one very normal sunny morning,
Rex was standing in the middle of the town with a gun in his hand. The situation was quiet and tense. Rex was ready to
shoot all of these people, like almost every day. Rex didn't fear anyone. Rex didn't notice that someone was watching him.
This morning was very unusual
because now one man was standing with a gun in his hand. He was a very mysterious and silent man. All the citizens were so quiet and they were holding their breath. One moment later that mystery man shot at Rex. BOOM! And Rex feels to the ground. All the people stayed silent about the incident. Bad Rex's story had ended.
Self-evaluation:
+ ok
- short
- grammar
- unimaginative
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