lauantai 12. huhtikuuta 2014

The silent town

There was a little sunny farm town next to New York. The town had been terrorized by a murderer for many years. His name was Bad Rex. Bad Rex had come to the town many years ago because his sister was very sick. Rex's sister healed quickly but on one Tuesday night everything changed. Someone shot at Rex's sister, and she was badly wounded. She never got back to normal. She was bullied because her face was maimed. Finally, she died of her injuries.

Rex's anger grew inside him. He hated everyone in this town. When his anger grew, he began to plan for the so-called people's pruning. First he shot his sister's murderer, and then he started shooting at random people. His anger grew every time he shot something. His blood lust grew every day, and finally, he shot almost every oncoming human.

The citizens increased resistance to wards Rex. They began to plan, how they could get rid of Rex. Everyone in this city feared and hated Rex.

On one very normal sunny morning, Rex was standing in the middle of the town with a gun in his hand. The situation was quiet and tense. Rex was ready to shoot all of these people, like almost every day. Rex didn't fear anyone. Rex didn't notice that someone was watching him.



This morning was very unusual because now one man was standing with a gun in his hand. He was a very mysterious and silent man. All the citizens were so quiet and they were holding their breath. One moment later  that mystery man shot at Rex. BOOM! And Rex feels to the ground. All the people stayed silent about the incident. Bad Rex's story had ended.

Self-evaluation:
+ ok
- short
- grammar
- unimaginative

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